Paula Davies
John L Davies
Cath Wright
Simon Allen
Group 2
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Simon Allen
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| No 75 |
How/Why I Did It:
Taken
in Cordoba, last September - whilst wandering around the backstreets. I
was attracted by the bright colours of the flowers and the simplicity
of the image. Not too much done in processing - tweaked the perspective
slightly, and a bit of work with curves.
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| Paula Davies |
This
is the sort of picture that I enjoy taking when we go to France.
You have done a good job with the perspective setting but I would be
tempted to crop from the top of the image to just above the
flowers. As it stands the number 75 seems rather lost but
cropping from the top seems to give it more prominence - and it is
after all your title. I would be tempted to apply a painterly
effect but then I rarely ever end up with a straight image when I have
photographed flowers!
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John Davies |
A
good graphic image. I like the strong contrasts between the saturated
colours against the white wall and the number at the base is the icing
on the cake. It is one of those images that you could really play with
in Photoshop. You say you have tweaked the perspective “slightly” but
you seem to have fallen between two stools. I think you should have
either kept the converging verticals or gone the whole way and squared
it up completely. I would favour the latter.
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Cath Wright |
Well
spotted - I liked the simplicity of this shot with the lovely contrast
between the white wall and the window area. The arrangement of the
plants in the window work particularly well. One small comment is to
try moving the number 75 a little higher (nearer to the window) so
there is not so much white shown below and greater focus on the lovely
window area.
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